I have a few things I need to do to improve my summary project.  I know there are parts in there that are too long and can be left out.  I have a really bad habit of going on and on when writing summaries as I have mentioned in a prior blog post.  I also have a lot of past and present tense issues in my paper right now.  I was using past tense way too often, and now I need to change those past tense words to present tense.  I also think I might have analyzed the documentary in some areas where I should not be doing that at all in this paper.  I know for sure from quickly reading through some areas that I have run on sentences that can be shortened and or made into separate sentences.  There are also a few gray areas from the film that I might need to explain some more as well.  Overall I think it is a strong summary, but it isn't perfect yet.